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Student Writer: Nathaly Pabon

This fourth grader describes the perfect spring.

This week’s featured writer: Nathaly Pabon

School: Nathan Hale Elementary School

Age: 10

Grade: 4

Teacher: Mrs. Marcella

What have you learned in school that makes you a better writer? I learned to indent paragraphs.  I also learned that I love to write poems and that anything can be turned into a poem.

What is your favorite book? Sideways Stories from Wayside School.

What do you like to do outside of school? I like to keep a book of poems and I like to text my friends.  I often use text words in my writing.  I also like to roller skate and ride my bike.

Nathaly’s writing:

 Spring

It's as sunny as bees to honey,

Kids want to play

They want to play in May.

The flowers smell as fresh

As ripe strawberries,

Ripe strawberries on this Spring day.

Children play with each other.

It's also the month for the mothers.

Spring is fun, but don't pick the flowers!

Planting them took many hours.

I like Spring, can't you tell?

I like Spring very well.

 

Venus June 22, 2011 at 07:45 PM
She is a gifted young lady and a very kind Classmate.
Betsy January 10, 2013 at 09:33 PM
Very proud mom shes always reading and writing very intellectual I have very high hopes for her.:-)

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