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Student Writer: Naylah Valentin

All dog lovers will enjoy this seven year old's poem.

This week’s featured writer: Naylah Valentin

School: Roger Sherman Elementary School

Age: 7

Grade:  2

Teacher: Mrs. Crouse

What have you learned in school that makes you a better writer? I learned that you need to have complete sentences that go with the topic.

What is your favorite book? 1 Fish, 2 Fish, Red Fish, Blue Fish

What do you like to do outside of school? I like to read, dance, draw, fish and practice karate.

Naylah’s writing:

My Dog

I love to be with my dog

Who sits on a big, brown log.

He chases my lazy cat,

Right off the yellow mat!

Whenever there is a ball,

There is my dog to call.

When we take a bath,

My dog wets the path!

When we go walk,

We have a small talk.

I love my dog,

He is better than a hog!

 

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