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Student Writer: Paige Frederick

Considering a new puppy? This third grader's persuasive essay will help you make a decision.

This week’s featured writer: Paige Frederick

School: Our Lady of Mount Carmel

Age: 8

Grade: 3

Teacher: Mrs. Barbara Torrente

What have you learned in school that makes you a better writer? Proofreading my work and adding details to my sentences.

What is your favorite book? Beezus and Ramona by Beverly Cleary

What do you like to do outside of school? I enjoy gymnastics and playing basketball.

Paige’s writing:                   

      Hello, my name is Paige.  I work in an animal shelter.  I came across the most adorable puppy ever.  His name is Sparky.  While I have been working with him, he has been doing very well in everything I do with him.  He is a very nice puppy and I love working with him.  He is loving, caring, and obedient.  You will love him.  He is only one month old and very precious. He is a nice little Chihuahua.  He has a caramel color to him.  You should come to the shelter and meet him.

Elizabeth February 02, 2012 at 01:40 AM
She is pretty good at persuading. Maybe she will be a lawyer some day :)

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